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Thank you guys :]]

The beginning caught my eyes. The middle, I kinda got lost. And lost a little interest. Then the end caught my eye again. I think its good though :]

I like this. I can close my eyes and picture it. The thunder kinda though me off a little. But I think I get what your saying? A new day ...

I think this was good. I didnt understand it though. But it was good. :]

I think this poem is great kim. keep up the good work. Amelia i agree with bigbadbear. Give everyone some slack. Not everyone is a great writer.

I love it kim. I wish I could write like you.

I love it. Hurry and write chapter 7! Tell me when its up.

I... Love.. It. Its very good kim. I cant wait for chapter 6 :D

i love it :]]] good job kimmy

Its soo good kim! All I noticed was you forgot a few ". But other then that. Amazing. I cant wait for the next chapter :]]

I think it is amazing :] Keep up the good work ;D Cant wait till the second chapter comes out! I'm excited to see what will happen next

Its very good kimmy :] I love it :D Cant wait for more ;D Plus, You inspired me to... try to write my own haha :] ILOVEYOU!